Grandvision's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[SlowMoe]

Hmmm.

That was a bit whack, it's not bad thought it's just a bit classical but doesn't really fit into hip-hop. A bit, the beat is okay, but certainly can be improved. The clipping is annoying!

S-Rock responds:

useless almost

[{R094L} - Heavenly Feeling]

Ehem?

http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/liste n/173392

i think you stole my idead, so can you change this song or something. It's not to steal other's songs.

Ryan094 responds:

Wow, oh my god. I swear I never heard your song before. Obvisouly we have just used the same song software. Seeing as there were around 20 sound pools ours would be the same.

[Elweed - Ryuiong]

Fascinating but bad quality.

This should go into the Rock section or something similar. Also the drum base was over repeated there. The sounds were okay I think. They were just too simple but they were relaxing for me. Just mix up the drum base a bit more, make it more varied.

Elweed responds:

Thnx for comment and tips i will work on it:)

[Theme of the Damned]

Bad.

The rhythm was quite bad, I didn't quite enjoy it. The high pitch bell sounds were quite annoying and didn't fit in with the rest of the music. it was short really and not that good. Put more time into it and make a good rhythm of the bells. They were badly humanized.

Hawkpal responds:

.....And the rhythm is the only part you'd like to critique?

I only used Midi Maker in creation of this. Personally, I can't find too many better programs to do so with. (PM with suggestions if you want >.>)

It was short, of course, because it is a loop. Loops are generally not too long.

Ah well. I must admit, I am fairly new to the game. I will indeed take your review in mind. Probably going to make a piano piece next anyway.

[[tC] - Shutter]

NICE

Nice combination of sound there. WHAT PROGRAM DID YOU USE?!?!? TELL ME!!!! PLEASE?

namoroso responds:

FL Studio 7

[Jungle (LOOP)]

Too loud

This was too loud and messed up wit the sounds. It hurt my ears a little. Try making more soft sounds. Not distortions and so on.

SREvol responds:

it didn't mess the sounds up, its all meant to be distorted and such, it's got really heavy sidechaining and soft clipping, its definately not stuffed up.

[Evil-Dog - The Weight of Time]

Catchy

This was indeed quite catchy, liked the rhythm. Quite fast which I like. Your getting better, keep at it. One of the best I've heard this day XD

Evil-Dog responds:

yeah I don't REALLY like catchy stuff....but usually its the lyrics that turn me off....I kinda like happy punk...anyway...I compose what I can :)
thanks for the review

[Lord of the Rings tribute]

Interesting

i think this is kind of a modern version, because of the electronica. Not bad at all. I liked it, the sounds fitted together greatly. Was quite calm but I'm afraid it just didn't sound like some of the music from the Lord of the RIngs. Good try thought.

eRiKcaS responds:

Yeah, it wasn't ment to fit into the movie, it was just something I had in my head after watching the triology. Thanks for the8 ;)

[Ctsg3 Clip [IDM]]

What was this?

I think this goes in the Ambient section. Quite a strange loop. Strange sounds. Really boring and is not enjoyable to listen.

Sythec responds:

lol mmk? It is a segment within a Continue-The-Song-Game within team "Bitchtonez". The effort and segments within it are actually quite deep lol.