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[DXM - Organic System]

WEll...

I can't really say this is bad but I must say this needs hell of an improvement. The drum base first of all is way too repetitive, mix it up so the song will sound more varied. The synth is blurred, must be in volume with the beat. After the middle beat, the drum comes in again but with nothing just a little small blurred synth. Add some catchy piano roll maybe? I don't really know it's your song but for now it lacks a lot. An electric arp would be nice actually somewhere in there, just make it rhyme with the drum base. That's all I gotta say.

tijnn responds:

wellll... All these points you were lighting up that should be improved, im more than sorry but that's just how i want my song to be, i love trance-evoking drum and bass, and if you can't go with the flow, well sorry, then it's not your thing. n_N and for the synths, i love a deep dark overdrived blurry synth like you love your mother hehehehe.

Thanks for the help though.

[Happiness [PREVIEW]]

AWESOME

Damn right awesome in my mind. Really Happy Hardcore with a clear simple beat, like the snare and the piano rhythm. I especially like the bit near the ending. KEEP DANCING!

SplatterClock responds:

Thanks a bunch for the review :) I try to make my music as happy as I possibly can. Glad to know some people actually like it :D

[MPL7-Midnight Club Hop(Final)]

Not bad

Sounded trance like, thought you could have added a nice non-hip-hop beat to it. It sounded Chinese also. was kind of relaxing, and calm. Some parts sounded out of rhythm: Somewhere 56-1:12.

Mister-Monker responds:

god fawk ya i think i can hear it,but thanks tho neway,and wtf chinese? XD lulz ^^

['08 Horror Stalker]

Brilliant piece!

A really horrifying atmos effect you've made there. i like the high pitched violin loads. Keep em coming Pete, I'm James Moer btw(AK: New Generation, Hellfire.)

Check out my latest song? :-)

EvilRaccoon responds:

Heya! Thanks for the review! =D I'll check out your music of course! :D

[Don't Eat The Strudel]

WTF?

What is this piece of crap put together in 10 minutes the most. The vocals are really really horrible. No proper quality, the beat is really not funky but spacy. It's like runescape music and it sucks. Sorry but you must improve this. Besides how did this get on the top of the FUNK section?!

-.-

Klimdeeni responds:

these comments make me laugh
I agree with every one of them
this is the only song I've ever made and I get so many comments telling me how great it is.
I guess it's more about the lyrics than the music. not to say the lyrics are great either

[SlowMoe]

Hmmm.

That was a bit whack, it's not bad thought it's just a bit classical but doesn't really fit into hip-hop. A bit, the beat is okay, but certainly can be improved. The clipping is annoying!

S-Rock responds:

useless almost

[{R094L} - Heavenly Feeling]

Ehem?

http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/liste n/173392

i think you stole my idead, so can you change this song or something. It's not to steal other's songs.

Ryan094 responds:

Wow, oh my god. I swear I never heard your song before. Obvisouly we have just used the same song software. Seeing as there were around 20 sound pools ours would be the same.

[Elweed - Ryuiong]

Fascinating but bad quality.

This should go into the Rock section or something similar. Also the drum base was over repeated there. The sounds were okay I think. They were just too simple but they were relaxing for me. Just mix up the drum base a bit more, make it more varied.

Elweed responds:

Thnx for comment and tips i will work on it:)

[Theme of the Damned]

Bad.

The rhythm was quite bad, I didn't quite enjoy it. The high pitch bell sounds were quite annoying and didn't fit in with the rest of the music. it was short really and not that good. Put more time into it and make a good rhythm of the bells. They were badly humanized.

Hawkpal responds:

.....And the rhythm is the only part you'd like to critique?

I only used Midi Maker in creation of this. Personally, I can't find too many better programs to do so with. (PM with suggestions if you want >.>)

It was short, of course, because it is a loop. Loops are generally not too long.

Ah well. I must admit, I am fairly new to the game. I will indeed take your review in mind. Probably going to make a piano piece next anyway.