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Trance SECTION PLEASE!

This is not industrial. It's nice thought, the beat and the rhythm, just please it up a beat. and lees distorted bass but I loved the beats.

Fascinating but bad quality.

This should go into the Rock section or something similar. Also the drum base was over repeated there. The sounds were okay I think. They were just too simple but they were relaxing for me. Just mix up the drum base a bit more, make it more varied.

Elweed responds:

Thnx for comment and tips i will work on it:)

Good eh?

http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/liste n/153995

It's a nice remix anyway. The link was to prove that you nearly had the same Title.

Anyways, nice remix and mastering, a bit catchy and enjoyable to listen.

Brilliant.

This was absolutely blow-minded brilliant .I loved every second of it, I actually download nearly all of your tracks and transferred them on my MP3 Player to listen to it while I go to school. I'm a huge fan and this song was one of the most professional one's you've ever created. I just love it. Totally inspiring. I would like to encourage you to continue making music, CERTAINLY MAKE A CD AND IT WILL SELL!

I love your determination and the will you put into your songs, it really stands out. Well done!

Great.

I JUST LOVE THE INTRO! It's freaking awesome. Though as the guy said above me, the drums should be harder. The rhythm is nice. It's kind of a sad song I believe. The space sound at 1:04 could be cleaned up a bit. The overall song was a bit repetitive and I didn't really like the end with the deep church piano notes, but it was nice anyway. Keep improving.

Pretty good.

The song is actually pretty good, I loved it. It was calm and with good rhythm as well had a nice drum order. The solo could be improved. Thought the overall quality of the song could be improved too. There are some unclear parts in the song. I don't quite like the scratchy guitar sound, >.<

But it's prettu good for a rock song, especially you making it with real instruments.

Tone down the bass!

Can yo tone down the bass a bit, it would sound much better. Also the beat is quite repetitive but you come up with good beats. Thought I don't like the bass even if I have half the bass turned on on my speakers(that's my default, actually.)

So this was not bad but there is still room for improvement like more industrial space sound varieties. That's all.

Good but not good enough.

Seriously, I think the track would sound so much better without the distorted guitar, I guarantee you that. The beat is nice after 15 second,I really like it and the clarity is good too. I like how it's clam, but it can become even more calmer and maybe even fit into the Classical Music Section if you remove the distortion. That's all.

Bad.

The rhythm was quite bad, I didn't quite enjoy it. The high pitch bell sounds were quite annoying and didn't fit in with the rest of the music. it was short really and not that good. Put more time into it and make a good rhythm of the bells. They were badly humanized.

Hawkpal responds:

.....And the rhythm is the only part you'd like to critique?

I only used Midi Maker in creation of this. Personally, I can't find too many better programs to do so with. (PM with suggestions if you want >.>)

It was short, of course, because it is a loop. Loops are generally not too long.

Ah well. I must admit, I am fairly new to the game. I will indeed take your review in mind. Probably going to make a piano piece next anyway.

Haha, good work.

Nice song, really good work there no joke. Simple and relaxing. Good use of piano notes and the rhythm was properly constructed. Could be used for putting babies to sleep too,lol. Not joking.

Anyways good work on this piece and hope seeing more stuff from you!

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