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[EurTripComeDown]

Tone down the bass!

Can yo tone down the bass a bit, it would sound much better. Also the beat is quite repetitive but you come up with good beats. Thought I don't like the bass even if I have half the bass turned on on my speakers(that's my default, actually.)

So this was not bad but there is still room for improvement like more industrial space sound varieties. That's all.

[Virtual Amp Test]

Good but not good enough.

Seriously, I think the track would sound so much better without the distorted guitar, I guarantee you that. The beat is nice after 15 second,I really like it and the clarity is good too. I like how it's clam, but it can become even more calmer and maybe even fit into the Classical Music Section if you remove the distortion. That's all.

[Theme of the Damned]

Bad.

The rhythm was quite bad, I didn't quite enjoy it. The high pitch bell sounds were quite annoying and didn't fit in with the rest of the music. it was short really and not that good. Put more time into it and make a good rhythm of the bells. They were badly humanized.

Hawkpal responds:

.....And the rhythm is the only part you'd like to critique?

I only used Midi Maker in creation of this. Personally, I can't find too many better programs to do so with. (PM with suggestions if you want >.>)

It was short, of course, because it is a loop. Loops are generally not too long.

Ah well. I must admit, I am fairly new to the game. I will indeed take your review in mind. Probably going to make a piano piece next anyway.

[The Piano Whisper 3.- J.T.]

Haha, good work.

Nice song, really good work there no joke. Simple and relaxing. Good use of piano notes and the rhythm was properly constructed. Could be used for putting babies to sleep too,lol. Not joking.

Anyways good work on this piece and hope seeing more stuff from you!

[Clock Tower]

Nice!

A pretty good tune and rhythm there mate. The organs sounding with the drums and the gritty metal was good, sounded spooky. Good job there. I like how everything sounds with the pace of the drums and they nearly match with the guitar and the organs.

Quite short. It's quite catchy too.

[[tC] - Shutter]

NICE

Nice combination of sound there. WHAT PROGRAM DID YOU USE?!?!? TELL ME!!!! PLEASE?

namoroso responds:

FL Studio 7

[Jungle (LOOP)]

Too loud

This was too loud and messed up wit the sounds. It hurt my ears a little. Try making more soft sounds. Not distortions and so on.

SREvol responds:

it didn't mess the sounds up, its all meant to be distorted and such, it's got really heavy sidechaining and soft clipping, its definately not stuffed up.

[Evil-Dog - The Weight of Time]

Catchy

This was indeed quite catchy, liked the rhythm. Quite fast which I like. Your getting better, keep at it. One of the best I've heard this day XD

Evil-Dog responds:

yeah I don't REALLY like catchy stuff....but usually its the lyrics that turn me off....I kinda like happy punk...anyway...I compose what I can :)
thanks for the review

[Lord of the Rings tribute]

Interesting

i think this is kind of a modern version, because of the electronica. Not bad at all. I liked it, the sounds fitted together greatly. Was quite calm but I'm afraid it just didn't sound like some of the music from the Lord of the RIngs. Good try thought.

eRiKcaS responds:

Yeah, it wasn't ment to fit into the movie, it was just something I had in my head after watching the triology. Thanks for the8 ;)

[Ctsg3 Clip [IDM]]

What was this?

I think this goes in the Ambient section. Quite a strange loop. Strange sounds. Really boring and is not enjoyable to listen.

Sythec responds:

lol mmk? It is a segment within a Continue-The-Song-Game within team "Bitchtonez". The effort and segments within it are actually quite deep lol.