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[[EDJRMX] Beats n Bass]

Nice!

I thought the drums were a little too hard for this awesome intro, it just blew me away. The vocals are really good. Thought when the drums come in again, it sounds too loud really, well it's good but the drums must have some nice rhythm to it to match the synth. Overall a kick ass song.

EnkoreDJ responds:

thanks :)

[Acoustica]

Not tuned.

All I can say is that that guitar is totally not tuned, it just sounds to vibrating, too much swanky bass in it. That makes it un tuned. Tune it properly, and get a better drummer, I bet you have done it. Well practice makes perfect.

[Forever - DJ Rif (DEMO)]

Good but

The intro must have a longer build up time. It's just a little bit too short now. It really just jumps into the beat straight away, maybe continue the intro with the synth, while a small drum loop starts to beat, then at the end of the intro, a final swift 4 beat loop, BAM, BAM, ---really small pause--- BRAAAM(3 drum hits really close up), and then the main drum & base comes. that way it will sound more professional. Hope I helped.

[A Walk Down The Trail]

Good

Seems very familiar like mine single piano note in my latest song, if you want you can check it out but this is way better than my song. Great job, nice rhythm and it was cleverly relaxing and heavenly felt.

[Magnetized (Remix)]

Not bad!

Kind of a mix interception between hard trance and light trance. I liked the beat and the synth as well. In fact I loved the synth. The electric synth gave it a nice trance-like feeling as well. It sounded a bit like Dance from 3:00. Anyways good job on this song. 9:10 5/5

[Georgia Tech D-line]

What?

Shouldn't this be in Rock or something. Anyway the drum base sounds very blurred and sometimes out of rhythm. It's a bit repetitive but that's fine. Certain;y needs a guitar part in there somewhere.

[DXM - Organic System]

WEll...

I can't really say this is bad but I must say this needs hell of an improvement. The drum base first of all is way too repetitive, mix it up so the song will sound more varied. The synth is blurred, must be in volume with the beat. After the middle beat, the drum comes in again but with nothing just a little small blurred synth. Add some catchy piano roll maybe? I don't really know it's your song but for now it lacks a lot. An electric arp would be nice actually somewhere in there, just make it rhyme with the drum base. That's all I gotta say.

tijnn responds:

wellll... All these points you were lighting up that should be improved, im more than sorry but that's just how i want my song to be, i love trance-evoking drum and bass, and if you can't go with the flow, well sorry, then it's not your thing. n_N and for the synths, i love a deep dark overdrived blurry synth like you love your mother hehehehe.

Thanks for the help though.

[One Day at a Time]

Bad, not?

The piano completely doesn't fit in with the rest of the song. The vocals are okay but need some clearing and more volume to it. There's not much except a drum base and some snares. Build upon it!

[Happiness [PREVIEW]]

AWESOME

Damn right awesome in my mind. Really Happy Hardcore with a clear simple beat, like the snare and the piano rhythm. I especially like the bit near the ending. KEEP DANCING!

SplatterClock responds:

Thanks a bunch for the review :) I try to make my music as happy as I possibly can. Glad to know some people actually like it :D

[Saw Theme Scrapsound Mix]

INSANE

THIS IS PURELY INSANE MUSIC. NICE OVERALL REMIX. Great humanizing of the drums. The velocity is just right for the bass. Really great composition. KEEP EM UP!