Hmm
You get as a prominent artist for dance in the audio portal but only have 3 songs and only one of them is dance, this is weird.
This wasn't particularly that good, present kicks and basses, not very good. Sounded very tackish and amateurish but not bad for your first song. Get some better sounds. Look for Vengeance Sound Packs 1,2,3,4. Those will help greatly with cymbals, kicks, snares and claps. As with the melody against the bass, it wasn't that good sounding, it also sounded very repetitive. Repetitiveness is not good in music. The melody didn't particularly flow either. Keep practicing. And find some tutorials on youtube on dance melodies.