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[RAIZEN]

What to say?

I think this was quite a good fight movie for a stick figure fights but what I must say is this was quite dissapointing too. Your special effects can be improved because I saw that they lacked particles and they should have lasted a bit more than usual.
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I also saw that you tried putting in a story but you threw all the things in my face, and not even in order. That means the story was confusing, who was that main red horned character. Why was he there? You didn't even show a sceen(sorry I do not have a spell checker with me.) of how he escaped. It would be much better with the escaped part in place.
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Overall I think your movements were smooth but not smooth enough, in some places they kind of jumped and you didn't show more frames, or was it my computer. I don't know but maybe you ca go back and check every frame. This was entertaining but dissapointing at the same time as I said before, that is because I have seen thousands of stick figure fights but this was of the better ones but still. fight animations get boring if they not done creativly and originaly. Try something new. I'm sure you will get better.

[Edible Castle #10]

Good finish.

Was totally funny and original. Indeed a long good finish up of the series with a laugh!

[Angry Dog - Legal Lobster]

Birlliant.

I have nothing more to say. This is bloody brilliant!

I love every bit of it. Very unique and funny in a violence way. :D

[Edible Castle #9]

Awesome.

I love all your flash series of Edible Castle. You better release Episode 10 >:]

Anyway, it was funny as alwasy and brilliantly animated.

*Crash* xD

[Edible Castle #7]

Brilliant.

Brilliant as always. Funny and smooth. I loved the end, LOL.

Good work AGAIN.

[Edible Castle #8]

Actually...

This is one of your funniest one's. It's nicely animated as the others ones. I loved when they interrupted them, (a box of slaves xD.) and the Darth Vader mask. HIlarious.

Good job.

[Edible Castle #6]

hahahaha...

This is so funny, genius screenplay. It was very enjoyable. I had a good laugh on this. Especially the part where that guy said "Yeah, yoru a dick." xD

Good job.

[A Bunch of Madness!]

Bad.

Really badly animated, choppy and unsmooth. Didn't have much of a story and this tribute to madness was crap. I'm telling you no one really will like it except beginners. The blood was animated badly too, no gravity to it, no anticipation. It didn't look realistic nor smooth. You need to add more particles to it and make it flow smoothly like liquid.
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There weren't any gun sounds which made it boring while there was only the music, sure it was nice but this piece of track was supposed to be used in another much better animated Madness Animation which I saw a trailer of.
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2/10(Sounds.) 3(Animation) 2(Special effects)
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And I'm sure you just got those blood squirts from the madness pack in your library, -.-

[Edible Castle #4]

Brilliant.

This is bloody brilliant! Every second of it.
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Your style is unique and your ideas are good. The humour in this was mediocre but it was still nice. Keep em' coming!